Joe Connor: Differentiation Expert

Career Coach & Resume Writer

Joe Connor: Differentiation Expert Career Coach & Resume Writer Joe Connor: Differentiation Expert Career Coach & Resume Writer Joe Connor: Differentiation Expert Career Coach & Resume Writer

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    • WRITING
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      • Interview Preparation
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      • Help Me Choose a Career
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      • Help Me Start a Business
      • Military Job Transition
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    • FREE ADVICE
      • 10 Tips Successful Search
      • 5 Essential Search Tools
      • 5 Simple Tips For Anyone
      • 4 Negotiating Nevers
      • 4 Resume Writing Tips
      • 3 Resume Simplifying Tips
      • More Free Advice
    • ABOUT ME
      • About Me
      • 5 Job Search Principles
      • My Approach and Process
      • Who I Help
      • My Rates
      • Where Clients Been Hired
      • Quotes I Live And Work By
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Joe Connor: Differentiation Expert

Career Coach & Resume Writer

Joe Connor: Differentiation Expert Career Coach & Resume Writer Joe Connor: Differentiation Expert Career Coach & Resume Writer Joe Connor: Differentiation Expert Career Coach & Resume Writer

  • Home
  • WRITING
    • Resume Writing
    • Cover Letter Writing
    • LinkedIn Profile Writing
    • Thank You Letter or Email
    • My Rates
  • COACHING
    • Interview Preparation
    • Salary Negotiations
    • Networking Skills
    • My Rates
  • CAREER CHANGE
    • Help Me Choose a Career
    • Help Me Market Myself
    • Help Me Start a Business
    • Military Job Transition
    • Athlete Transition
    • My Rates
  • FREE ADVICE
    • 10 Tips Successful Search
    • 5 Essential Search Tools
    • 5 Simple Tips For Anyone
    • 4 Negotiating Nevers
    • 4 Resume Writing Tips
    • 3 Resume Simplifying Tips
    • More Free Advice
  • ABOUT ME
    • About Me
    • 5 Job Search Principles
    • My Approach and Process
    • Who I Help
    • My Rates
    • Where Clients Been Hired
    • Quotes I Live And Work By
    • Contact

3 RESUME SIMPLIFYING TIPS

 

Client yesterday said to me when reviewing her first draft: “wow, you really took a lot out of what I had in my resume.” And she was questioning me – and her questions were fair, so I’m sharing my feedback to her with you here. In the end, she agreed with me. Three simple reasons why more is NOT merrier – on your resume:


#1 The optics/visual presentation itself


First impressions are everything. If your resume looks crowded, the reader will not be impressed and will think: “Why does it have to be so crowded? Why can’t this person simply tell me what they do best and how they can help me? I don’t think I’m going to keep reading.”


Many job seekers don’t think about the big picture first impression of the optics – they only think about the actual text itself. So even though the employer is not hiring you to be a resume writer – your resume IS a first impression visual of how you communicate. And if it’s crowded and not succinct, that’s a huge optics/first impression negative. Remember, recruiters are not a fishing expedition and their time is money…


#2 …And what is the purpose of a resume anyway?


To make the reader feel too guilty not to call you for an interview – that is its only purpose, period! That means keep-it-simple-stupid (KISS) as my late father used to say (playfully!). What goes on a resume must be truthful and accurate, but not everything has to go on a resume. Focus on quality, not quantity. Have a laser light focus on what you can do for the employer – and validate it with accomplishments. Quickly.


#3 You have less than 10 seconds to control your narrative


Think of your resume like a TV commercial – you do not press mute! – where you PAY ATTENTION…to the entire commercial! That is what you want your resume to do. Within first 10 seconds, you capture the readers attention through a controlled narrative – e.g., you answer these questions: “What’s your story, John/Jane Doe – why are you the best/different/better?” By the 30 to 60 second mark: “Why should I feel too guilty not to call you for an interview?” should be answered, too.


A lot of resume writers have excellent writing ability – but most do not know how to tell a story in 10 seconds or less. And that is a HUGE difference. A well-written resume MIGHT get you an interview. A well-written resume that tells a story WILL get you an interview – this is what I do best (ask my clients!).

In review…be the noise the reader can’t ignore by focusing on what you best and how you can help the employer (with validation). Do not over-crowd or information dump your resume, especially with soft skill “fluff” meaningless drivel and baloney. Remember, you want a call to action (the reader to call you for an interview!), not a distraction (an unfocused, crowded, or confusing resume that doesn’t stand out, especially when you’ve only got 10 seconds to control the narrative).


If you need help, I provide a free consultation: joecsd@gmail.com.

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Joe Connor Career Marketing and Resume Writing

San Diego, California, United States

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